Collagen Fibre
Collagen Fibre

Can you give me your opinion on this?
I am not trying to advertise/sell anything on yahoo answers, i just want opinions on a flyer that i made. if you saw this would it interest you? would you call for more info? if not, why? and what would you add to make it better?:
Pamper Yourself
Did you know? as skin ages, collagen and elastin, fibers that keep the skin firm, weaken. The skin looks loose and lax, becomes thinner and loses fat, so that it looks less plump and smooth. While all these changes are taking place, gravity is also at work, pulling at the skin and causing it to sag.
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Call for more details.
i would try to compress it a little...like imagine u yourself standing at a billboard. You would be more likely to read a pamphlet that was a little shorter. Then when they like what they see they are more likely to call for details...
i would do it like this...
LADIES...are u tired of seeing the effects of aging on your skin? I have found the answer...call for a free demonstration, no strings attached.
(or something to that effect) Whatever u choose I wish u luck!!
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